The Dark Generals! (Book 1)
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The Dark Generals! (Book 1)
This story will be a random stroy about The SwordHaven Warriors Clan and places in AQW. If u have any ideas for what should happen next, or if i should change something, u can talk to me in game or PM me. Need ideas for a story line! if anyone is interested in helping me right the story, tell me
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CHAPTER I Joined forces Story Idea From Wicked Dragonmaster
Darkman Alex arrived with the other two army commanders, Seth2014 and Connor20133, entered Artix's HQ after hearing about an attack from the forces attacking SwordHaven
"My SwordHaven warriors, our worst fear has happened, the N00b forces and the Undead Forces have teamed up, and as we speak are attacking SwordHaven from all sides," Artix told them. He looked at the moniter to check the current standings of the war.
"Let me attack them sir, my army has taken almost no casualties, and have the strongest soldiers," Seth2014 said.
"You sure sound sure of yourself," Connor20133 said.
"Why You!" Seth2014 Shouted.
"Stop! I've assigned both of you to charge the front line!" Artix shouted, "But Alex, i have a different plan for you, i have have located the HQ of the enemies!, Their generals should be there and-"
" I think i understand, you want me to investigate," Alex interupted.
"Yes, exactly."
Seth, Connor, and Alex were completeing their tasks, when a dark cloud enveloped the battle field, and Seth, Connor, and everyone else, vanished without a trace.
"What, no..." Alex whispered, "only the power of the Dark Overload can create a Dark Cloud of that size and power." Another one hit the SwordHaven HQ, and Alex shouted, "Artix!"
End of Chapter 1, Chapter 2 coming soon
So what do you think of it so far
Darkman Alex arrived with the other two army commanders, Seth2014 and Connor20133, entered Artix's HQ after hearing about an attack from the forces attacking SwordHaven
"My SwordHaven warriors, our worst fear has happened, the N00b forces and the Undead Forces have teamed up, and as we speak are attacking SwordHaven from all sides," Artix told them. He looked at the moniter to check the current standings of the war.
"Let me attack them sir, my army has taken almost no casualties, and have the strongest soldiers," Seth2014 said.
"You sure sound sure of yourself," Connor20133 said.
"Why You!" Seth2014 Shouted.
"Stop! I've assigned both of you to charge the front line!" Artix shouted, "But Alex, i have a different plan for you, i have have located the HQ of the enemies!, Their generals should be there and-"
" I think i understand, you want me to investigate," Alex interupted.
"Yes, exactly."
Seth, Connor, and Alex were completeing their tasks, when a dark cloud enveloped the battle field, and Seth, Connor, and everyone else, vanished without a trace.
"What, no..." Alex whispered, "only the power of the Dark Overload can create a Dark Cloud of that size and power." Another one hit the SwordHaven HQ, and Alex shouted, "Artix!"
End of Chapter 1, Chapter 2 coming soon
So what do you think of it so far
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only chapter 1 follows wat u told me lol, but thanks for a start =D
here's a back cover summary.
When SwordHaven is ravaged by attacks from two armies, the 4 commanders must put a stop to the attacks. But a Dark Cloud leaves SwordHaven in ruins, and 3 of the commanders are NoWhere to be found.
The remaining commander learns of three Dark Generals behind the attack, but their leader, the Dark Overlord, is the true mystery. Darkman Alex must find his friends, and stop the Dark Overlord, before the rest of Lore is plunged into darkness
here's a back cover summary.
When SwordHaven is ravaged by attacks from two armies, the 4 commanders must put a stop to the attacks. But a Dark Cloud leaves SwordHaven in ruins, and 3 of the commanders are NoWhere to be found.
The remaining commander learns of three Dark Generals behind the attack, but their leader, the Dark Overlord, is the true mystery. Darkman Alex must find his friends, and stop the Dark Overlord, before the rest of Lore is plunged into darkness
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CHAPTER II [b] He Has a Son?![b]
Alex ran through the ruins of SwordHaven to his HQ where he found someone crying in Artix's chair.
"Who are you," Alex asked.
"Me? I'm the son of Artix, and you must be Darkman Alex, i saw you running here through the ruins, so i knew someone was still here," Artix's son replied.
"Artix had a son? What is your name?" Alex queried.
"My name is BladeWarrior, and i am your new king, sadly, your the only one left so i rule over just you k?" BladeWarrior said and he smiled.
"Um, ok..." Darkman replied.
"And as new king i command that you join me to find out who attacked us, and we need to find Seth, Connor, and my father," BladeWarrior ordered.
Alex had little choice, for BladeWarrior was his new king and he couldn't refuse his command. So Alex and BladeWarrior set out to find out who did this to their City, and destroy them.
End of Chapter 2, Chapter 3 coming soon
Alex ran through the ruins of SwordHaven to his HQ where he found someone crying in Artix's chair.
"Who are you," Alex asked.
"Me? I'm the son of Artix, and you must be Darkman Alex, i saw you running here through the ruins, so i knew someone was still here," Artix's son replied.
"Artix had a son? What is your name?" Alex queried.
"My name is BladeWarrior, and i am your new king, sadly, your the only one left so i rule over just you k?" BladeWarrior said and he smiled.
"Um, ok..." Darkman replied.
"And as new king i command that you join me to find out who attacked us, and we need to find Seth, Connor, and my father," BladeWarrior ordered.
Alex had little choice, for BladeWarrior was his new king and he couldn't refuse his command. So Alex and BladeWarrior set out to find out who did this to their City, and destroy them.
End of Chapter 2, Chapter 3 coming soon
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nice =p i see where your going with this...i like it keep up the good work
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all i can say is.....
OOOOOOO EMMMMMM GEEEEEEE!!!!!
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OOOOOOO EMMMMMM GEEEEEEE!!!!!
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CURRENT CHARACTERS
3 Commanders: Seth2014, Connor20133, Darkman Alex
Former King: Aritx
New King(Son of Artix): BladeWarrior
3 Dark Generals: Dark_Mega1, Wicked Dragonmaster, Exodia1010
Dark Overlord:Unknown to all (including me =D)
PEOPLE WITH NO SPOT AS OF NOW
Axzerus (sorry, i will find a main spot dont worry)
minor spots will be filled with old active members
including Jona Wizard, Justin_AQW, and Triton
3 Commanders: Seth2014, Connor20133, Darkman Alex
Former King: Aritx
New King(Son of Artix): BladeWarrior
3 Dark Generals: Dark_Mega1, Wicked Dragonmaster, Exodia1010
Dark Overlord:Unknown to all (including me =D)
PEOPLE WITH NO SPOT AS OF NOW
Axzerus (sorry, i will find a main spot dont worry)
minor spots will be filled with old active members
including Jona Wizard, Justin_AQW, and Triton
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i like being a dark general, im evil!!!
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CHAPTER III One Survives
"Dark Overlord sir, the attack on SwordHaven is complete," Dark General 1 said.
"Good, did Artix and his commanders die," Dark Overlord asked.
"Yes I believe," Dark General 2 responded.
"No," Dark General 3 said,"Darkman Alex has lived through the attack, and him and BladeWarrior are headed here to find us," Dark General 3 said. Everybody looked at him suprised, they thought it was impossible to live through a Dark Cloud.
"Are you sure Exodia(Dark General 3)?" Dark General 2 asked.
"I am sure Wicked Dragonmaster(Dark General 2)." He looked at The Dark Overlord and Dark General 1, who were closely listening, " Dark_Mega1(Dark General 1), Dark Overlord, any questions?"
"No," They replied together.
"They shall soon be arriving in BattleOn, Exodia1010, you are to stop them there, do not fail to complete this task, or i will have to punish you again," Dark Overlord said seriously.
"You only ever punish me! It's never Wicked or Dark! Why Overlord Why!" He shouted at his Overlord.
"Maybe you should do as your told! And it won't happen!" Dark Overlord shouted back.
"Sometimes i wish i wasn't a Dark General!" and he vanished without another word.
End of Chapter 3, Chapter 4 coming soon
"Dark Overlord sir, the attack on SwordHaven is complete," Dark General 1 said.
"Good, did Artix and his commanders die," Dark Overlord asked.
"Yes I believe," Dark General 2 responded.
"No," Dark General 3 said,"Darkman Alex has lived through the attack, and him and BladeWarrior are headed here to find us," Dark General 3 said. Everybody looked at him suprised, they thought it was impossible to live through a Dark Cloud.
"Are you sure Exodia(Dark General 3)?" Dark General 2 asked.
"I am sure Wicked Dragonmaster(Dark General 2)." He looked at The Dark Overlord and Dark General 1, who were closely listening, " Dark_Mega1(Dark General 1), Dark Overlord, any questions?"
"No," They replied together.
"They shall soon be arriving in BattleOn, Exodia1010, you are to stop them there, do not fail to complete this task, or i will have to punish you again," Dark Overlord said seriously.
"You only ever punish me! It's never Wicked or Dark! Why Overlord Why!" He shouted at his Overlord.
"Maybe you should do as your told! And it won't happen!" Dark Overlord shouted back.
"Sometimes i wish i wasn't a Dark General!" and he vanished without another word.
End of Chapter 3, Chapter 4 coming soon
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CHAPTER IV The Castle Guard
BladeWarrior and Darkman Alex walked from the Castle to The Front Gate of SwordHaven, where they could gather horses and their arms. After that, they walked to out the front gate, and they ran into the captain of the Castle Guard.
"Halt!" The Guard Captain shouted at the two, " what buisness do you have outside the City Walls!"
"I am the son of Artix, and Alex and I are going to figure out more on the Dark Cloud that took over SwordHaven," Blade said.
"BladeWarrior...last time I saw you you were about 7 years old."
"And now i'm 13, and King of this city, so let me past Justin."
"Call me by my full name!" He shouted, "Justin_aqw!"
"I'm your king, i will call you what i want," BladeWarrior replied, Justin was getting angry, but finally agreed to let them past the front gate. They marched for days, once they got to the Farm, disaster striked.
"I hear you are from SwordHaven, so let me ask you! How did you survive!!" a voice shouted, "It's impossible! And i have orders from The Dark Overlord to destroy you!"
"Then you must be a Dark General," Alex said, trying to keep calm.
"Yes! Dark General #3! Exodia1010!!!" He appeared in Blood Red Paladin Armor, "Beware the one, the only, EVIL PALADIN!!"
End of chapter 4, chapter 5 coming soon
Aw, did i end it at a bad spot, maybe..mehehe
BladeWarrior and Darkman Alex walked from the Castle to The Front Gate of SwordHaven, where they could gather horses and their arms. After that, they walked to out the front gate, and they ran into the captain of the Castle Guard.
"Halt!" The Guard Captain shouted at the two, " what buisness do you have outside the City Walls!"
"I am the son of Artix, and Alex and I are going to figure out more on the Dark Cloud that took over SwordHaven," Blade said.
"BladeWarrior...last time I saw you you were about 7 years old."
"And now i'm 13, and King of this city, so let me past Justin."
"Call me by my full name!" He shouted, "Justin_aqw!"
"I'm your king, i will call you what i want," BladeWarrior replied, Justin was getting angry, but finally agreed to let them past the front gate. They marched for days, once they got to the Farm, disaster striked.
"I hear you are from SwordHaven, so let me ask you! How did you survive!!" a voice shouted, "It's impossible! And i have orders from The Dark Overlord to destroy you!"
"Then you must be a Dark General," Alex said, trying to keep calm.
"Yes! Dark General #3! Exodia1010!!!" He appeared in Blood Red Paladin Armor, "Beware the one, the only, EVIL PALADIN!!"
End of chapter 4, chapter 5 coming soon
Aw, did i end it at a bad spot, maybe..mehehe
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full of supsense and thanks for helping to bring the smilies back!
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Lol can't wait till the next chapter this story is epic.
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CHAPTER V Exodia1010
"Exodia1010...aren't you the lowest ranked Dark General?" Blade joked.
"Ugh dont remind me," Exodia replied., "But enough of that...prepare to die!"
Exodia lunged at Darkman flying sword first at him, but Alex knocked him back with the Blade he stole from Sepulchure, back when he defeated him. Exodia shot a beam of darkness at BladeWarrior which he deflected with his shield, but the shield wasnt holding, it was cracking.
"Alex!" Blade shouted, "My shield cant hold! Stop Exodia! Now!"
Alex lunged at Exodia and slashed at him with all his might, but Exodia dodged, and jumped back and knocked Alex into the side of Yulgar's Inn. Blade unsheathed his sword and attacked Exodia when he was attacking Alex, he strucked Exodia in the arm. Exodia dropped his sword and Alex got up and backed him up against a tree.
"Please! Let me live! i will help you! The Dark Overlord never liked me anyway..." Exodia pleaded.
"And why should i trust the person who attacked us!" Darkman Alex questioned.
"Because, i can free your friends, Connor20133 and Seth2014," Exodia answered.
"If you free them...you can join us."
End of Chapter 5, Chapter 6 coming soon
"Exodia1010...aren't you the lowest ranked Dark General?" Blade joked.
"Ugh dont remind me," Exodia replied., "But enough of that...prepare to die!"
Exodia lunged at Darkman flying sword first at him, but Alex knocked him back with the Blade he stole from Sepulchure, back when he defeated him. Exodia shot a beam of darkness at BladeWarrior which he deflected with his shield, but the shield wasnt holding, it was cracking.
"Alex!" Blade shouted, "My shield cant hold! Stop Exodia! Now!"
Alex lunged at Exodia and slashed at him with all his might, but Exodia dodged, and jumped back and knocked Alex into the side of Yulgar's Inn. Blade unsheathed his sword and attacked Exodia when he was attacking Alex, he strucked Exodia in the arm. Exodia dropped his sword and Alex got up and backed him up against a tree.
"Please! Let me live! i will help you! The Dark Overlord never liked me anyway..." Exodia pleaded.
"And why should i trust the person who attacked us!" Darkman Alex questioned.
"Because, i can free your friends, Connor20133 and Seth2014," Exodia answered.
"If you free them...you can join us."
End of Chapter 5, Chapter 6 coming soon
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Oh noes! I need a new shield! and yulgar a new inn, lol. Nice Dark.. nice...
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Chapter VI To Betray An Overlord
"Exodia has betrayed us..." Wicked finally told Dark_Mega1. "He lost to Alex and Blade, and as we speak is leading them to free Connor and Seth, this may be the end of our plans."
"I never did trust Exodia," Dark_Mega1 said, "He always seemed like she didnt like being one of us."
"Hmph, your right, he kinda got a LITTLE angry at The Dark Overlord before he left, but i didnt think it would come to this."
"Then we must stop them in ShadowFall, it's the only choice we have," Dark replied.
"But Sepulchure would prolly kill them...oh wait...Alex killed him," Wicked said.
"Yes, but his son, Axzerus, now rules over the city, and him and his Undead army wait, but our Overlord told us specifically that we must kill him to drain his power," Dark_Mega1 said, "I've got it, listen, I'm intrusting this job to you, Wicked Dragonmaster, do not fail us, once they..."
End of Chapter 6, chapter 7 coming soon
"Exodia has betrayed us..." Wicked finally told Dark_Mega1. "He lost to Alex and Blade, and as we speak is leading them to free Connor and Seth, this may be the end of our plans."
"I never did trust Exodia," Dark_Mega1 said, "He always seemed like she didnt like being one of us."
"Hmph, your right, he kinda got a LITTLE angry at The Dark Overlord before he left, but i didnt think it would come to this."
"Then we must stop them in ShadowFall, it's the only choice we have," Dark replied.
"But Sepulchure would prolly kill them...oh wait...Alex killed him," Wicked said.
"Yes, but his son, Axzerus, now rules over the city, and him and his Undead army wait, but our Overlord told us specifically that we must kill him to drain his power," Dark_Mega1 said, "I've got it, listen, I'm intrusting this job to you, Wicked Dragonmaster, do not fail us, once they..."
End of Chapter 6, chapter 7 coming soon
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Aw... not again, WHY MUST YOU TORTURE US! , oh and btw Exodia is a guy not a girl, lol
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BladeWarrior wrote:Aw... not again, WHY MUST YOU TORTURE US! , oh and btw Exodia is a guy not a girl, lol
oops lol...i always do that when im writing fast...my second chapter was filled with she's...so i edited it...lol
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there may not be another chapter in a while...i've been busy lately, just letting you know =)
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CHAPTER VII Finding Friends
"So, Exodia, you say you know where our friends," Alex asked," So, where."
"It will kill you to hear this...but they are trapped in the dungeon of Castle ShadowFall, and we need to take a boat to get there, but my old friend triton has aranged that for us."
After arriving at the docks, Blade, Exodia, and Alex boarded triton's ship, the...S.S. Triton *sighs*. about half way across the great sea, an army boat from ShadowFall attacked, the S.S. Triton took heavy damage.
"No! My wonderful ship!" Triton shouted. "Exodia! Stop them! "They are enemies of great SwordHaven Empire, right!"
"Yes Triton calm down!" Alex said, trying to keep himself and the others calm. "I've seen that ship before, it transfers dungeon prisoners to there new prison...the bottom of the Great Sea, I have no doubt Seth and Connor are on that ship." But as Alex said that a giant cannonball came shooting out of the prison cell, taking the whole cell with it, and landed just behind the ship, it sank to the bottom of the sea, and the wave sent the ship flying to the shores, of ShadowFall.
"What was that," a voice said. "It sounded like the drop is complete."
"I heard it too! Wait, there's a voice it sounds like Alex!" another voice said. "Alex! It is you!" Seth and Connor emerge from the barrels they were hiding in and tell Alex about what happened.
"It wasnt anything really, we just escaped from the guards taking us to the ship and hid in these barrels till the drop was complete," Connor told him.
"But then you showed, so now i feel like we are in more trouble than before," Seth said. "Just Kidding, but now we can all escape together!"
End of chapter 7, Chapter 8 coming soon, hopefully
"So, Exodia, you say you know where our friends," Alex asked," So, where."
"It will kill you to hear this...but they are trapped in the dungeon of Castle ShadowFall, and we need to take a boat to get there, but my old friend triton has aranged that for us."
After arriving at the docks, Blade, Exodia, and Alex boarded triton's ship, the...S.S. Triton *sighs*. about half way across the great sea, an army boat from ShadowFall attacked, the S.S. Triton took heavy damage.
"No! My wonderful ship!" Triton shouted. "Exodia! Stop them! "They are enemies of great SwordHaven Empire, right!"
"Yes Triton calm down!" Alex said, trying to keep himself and the others calm. "I've seen that ship before, it transfers dungeon prisoners to there new prison...the bottom of the Great Sea, I have no doubt Seth and Connor are on that ship." But as Alex said that a giant cannonball came shooting out of the prison cell, taking the whole cell with it, and landed just behind the ship, it sank to the bottom of the sea, and the wave sent the ship flying to the shores, of ShadowFall.
"What was that," a voice said. "It sounded like the drop is complete."
"I heard it too! Wait, there's a voice it sounds like Alex!" another voice said. "Alex! It is you!" Seth and Connor emerge from the barrels they were hiding in and tell Alex about what happened.
"It wasnt anything really, we just escaped from the guards taking us to the ship and hid in these barrels till the drop was complete," Connor told him.
"But then you showed, so now i feel like we are in more trouble than before," Seth said. "Just Kidding, but now we can all escape together!"
End of chapter 7, Chapter 8 coming soon, hopefully
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Lol nice Dark is the next chapter gonna release when ShadowFall comes out?
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omg!!! that part about triton freaken killed me
o yeah shadowfall is a city on the back of the worlds biggest dracolich..so u might wanna say the dracolich landed in the ocean or something since were takeing a boat to it.
and nice story! i say screw mine i like yours too much
o yeah shadowfall is a city on the back of the worlds biggest dracolich..so u might wanna say the dracolich landed in the ocean or something since were takeing a boat to it.
and nice story! i say screw mine i like yours too much
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Or better yet a boat, with ROCKET POWERED ENGINES >=D
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