The Civil War (Book 3)
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The Civil War (Book 3)
CHAPTER I A Great Power
"No...why cant we just have a little bit of peace!?" Seth shouted.
"ITs not the way I'm supossed to rule i guess..." Alex said, "I have a bad feeling about this."
A wierd noise was coming from outside, and Blade ran into the room shouting, "Alex...its worse than it seems, the Elemental Fleet has awoken, we need that ancient power..."
"Alex looked out the window, and great airships rising from the Elemental Castle, and one small soldier ship flew towards SwordHaven, and flew right through the window Alex was standing in front of, he jumped out of the way just in time.
A girl jumped out of the airship and said, "Fira."
Alex responded with, "Hm," he thought for a second, like he knew the name, and he did, "Fira!?"
"Alex, Alex, Alex," Fira said, "Will you fight back now, seeing the impossible odd, or will you attempt to fight airships?"
Alex unsheathed his sword and said, "How many? How many of you betayed the Protectors!?"
"Just a few...3 or so, then we got our nice little soldiers, but only 3 big PoL members," she swung her sword, "You attempt to resist you die!"
"Blade, NOW!!!" Alex shouted. BladeWarrior pushed a button, and a hole popped up in the floor, Alex, Seth, Blade, Mega, Axzerus, and every soldier in the castle jumped into it, and the castle began to shake, Fira got back in the Soldier ship and flew off, and from underneath castle SwordHaven, the imperial fleet of SwordHaven emerged, and the War of the Airships, a Civil War, had begun.
"No...why cant we just have a little bit of peace!?" Seth shouted.
"ITs not the way I'm supossed to rule i guess..." Alex said, "I have a bad feeling about this."
A wierd noise was coming from outside, and Blade ran into the room shouting, "Alex...its worse than it seems, the Elemental Fleet has awoken, we need that ancient power..."
"Alex looked out the window, and great airships rising from the Elemental Castle, and one small soldier ship flew towards SwordHaven, and flew right through the window Alex was standing in front of, he jumped out of the way just in time.
A girl jumped out of the airship and said, "Fira."
Alex responded with, "Hm," he thought for a second, like he knew the name, and he did, "Fira!?"
"Alex, Alex, Alex," Fira said, "Will you fight back now, seeing the impossible odd, or will you attempt to fight airships?"
Alex unsheathed his sword and said, "How many? How many of you betayed the Protectors!?"
"Just a few...3 or so, then we got our nice little soldiers, but only 3 big PoL members," she swung her sword, "You attempt to resist you die!"
"Blade, NOW!!!" Alex shouted. BladeWarrior pushed a button, and a hole popped up in the floor, Alex, Seth, Blade, Mega, Axzerus, and every soldier in the castle jumped into it, and the castle began to shake, Fira got back in the Soldier ship and flew off, and from underneath castle SwordHaven, the imperial fleet of SwordHaven emerged, and the War of the Airships, a Civil War, had begun.
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Damn you sure know how to make a good cliff hanger story, btw you should have made the castle a gigantic golem when you press the button, and we would be inside it controling it.
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There's no big golems in my story! But there is a little spy airship that makes for the most interesting chapter I've written on this forum...I've already planned most of the story.
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Oh, he could be a pile of animated boulders that show up at the best times! Like just when they enemy aircraft flys off, it crashes into the pile!
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wow i havent been on pol in awhile...probably should post..
ah well
you were right dark.
i like this story better already
ah well
you were right dark.
i like this story better already
Re: The Civil War (Book 3)
There is going to be a small, fast ship thing that is going to be important in the story, and it looks like the Strahl from FFXII, and it needs a name...PM me if you have a name
Strahl pic (best i could find)
http://image.com.com/gamespot/images/2005/135/459841_20050516_screen009.jpg
Strahl pic (best i could find)
http://image.com.com/gamespot/images/2005/135/459841_20050516_screen009.jpg
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Hey if you guys dont think of a name soon...im naming it The
Mega Rules
Mega Rules
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Dark_Mega1 wrote:Hey if you guys dont think of a name soon...im naming it The
Mega Rules
*cough* We can't have that *cough* How about Sytroshock ?
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When we get one more suggestion I'll open a poll.
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Well I'm not getting anymore suggestions, so the ship is The Sytroshock
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CHAPTER II A Clan Split
"The SHW and LE are in a war, did you here?" Dracos told Melanie.
"Yes...that Nat, what is she planning?" Melanie wondered, "She pulls Fira and Scolor off with her too, those traitors.""
"Well you see...about that...," Dracos said nervously, "I am joining them too."
"WHAT!? He11ix GET HIM!" Melanie shouted. He11ix lunged at him, but Dracos jumped out of the way.
"You know no one has ever been able to catch me," He said.
"Why you!" He11ix shouted, and grabbed at him again, Dracos jumped backwards again, right into Tomahawk's arms.
"Tomahawk, take Dracos here to the cannon and fire him at LE's base, and He11ix, go get Triton, we have to decide on sides," Melanie ordered. He11ix ran of and got Triton, and they arrived in the throne room just in time to hear the cannon fire, and Tomahawk ran back in.
"You know Mel," Tomahawk said, "You probably killed him."
"HAHA! Killed Him!?" Melanie laughed, "You know how many times Zak fired him out of that cannon before you joined?"
"No..."
"Well...once...but he lived," She said, "Now about sides-" Just then a the cannon fired from LE, and just missed the HQ of PoL, and they all nodded, all thinking the same thing, SwordHaven Warriors.
"The SHW and LE are in a war, did you here?" Dracos told Melanie.
"Yes...that Nat, what is she planning?" Melanie wondered, "She pulls Fira and Scolor off with her too, those traitors.""
"Well you see...about that...," Dracos said nervously, "I am joining them too."
"WHAT!? He11ix GET HIM!" Melanie shouted. He11ix lunged at him, but Dracos jumped out of the way.
"You know no one has ever been able to catch me," He said.
"Why you!" He11ix shouted, and grabbed at him again, Dracos jumped backwards again, right into Tomahawk's arms.
"Tomahawk, take Dracos here to the cannon and fire him at LE's base, and He11ix, go get Triton, we have to decide on sides," Melanie ordered. He11ix ran of and got Triton, and they arrived in the throne room just in time to hear the cannon fire, and Tomahawk ran back in.
"You know Mel," Tomahawk said, "You probably killed him."
"HAHA! Killed Him!?" Melanie laughed, "You know how many times Zak fired him out of that cannon before you joined?"
"No..."
"Well...once...but he lived," She said, "Now about sides-" Just then a the cannon fired from LE, and just missed the HQ of PoL, and they all nodded, all thinking the same thing, SwordHaven Warriors.
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i hope i get to woop everyones butt =p
pol or le bring i the freak on TSW for the win
pol or le bring i the freak on TSW for the win
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CHAPTER III The Elementals Gain an Unexpected Ally
"Ugh...ugh...ow..." whined Dracos as Scolor carried him to his new room in the castle.
"Oh, quit your whining, it shouldn't have hurt...much," Scolor said, and he grinned.
"Ugh...oh yeah, like you've ever been fired out of a cannon," Dracos replied.
"Oh yeah well I've had worse, Zak BANNED me from The Protectors of Lore, you got to stay and chose to leave."
A new voice was heard from the doorway of Dracos's room, it was Fira, "It was your fault Scolor, if you hadn't of done you know what...things wouldn't have turned out this way."
OoS You dont know how much i know about PoL Alex
BiS "Yeah, well, but," Scolor didn't know how to reply to that, "They're story is completely different than mine, I don't know what Triton told Mel, but we just have completely different stories you-"
"SILENCE!" Fira shouted, "LEt's not stray from why I came here in the first place." She looks and Dracos and points, "DracosTheStrong, I hear you and Nat are "together" is that true?"
"Yes...it is true...we have been for a while."
"You trust her so much, you even told her your true name, which everybody already knew really, Lloyd," Fira said.
"His name is Lloyd?" Scolor asked.
"Yes, it is," Lloyd said to Scolor, then turned his attention to Fira and said, "You didn't come here to tell me my name, so why?"
"Nat wants to announce something to the four of us, we shall go," Fira said. So her, Scolor, and Lloyd walked into the throne room of Elemental Castle, where the met Nat, their leader, and what she told them shocked everyone.
"We have a new clan ally, the clan of one who used to be a Light Commandor, The Whispering Shadows."
"Ugh...ugh...ow..." whined Dracos as Scolor carried him to his new room in the castle.
"Oh, quit your whining, it shouldn't have hurt...much," Scolor said, and he grinned.
"Ugh...oh yeah, like you've ever been fired out of a cannon," Dracos replied.
"Oh yeah well I've had worse, Zak BANNED me from The Protectors of Lore, you got to stay and chose to leave."
A new voice was heard from the doorway of Dracos's room, it was Fira, "It was your fault Scolor, if you hadn't of done you know what...things wouldn't have turned out this way."
OoS You dont know how much i know about PoL Alex
BiS "Yeah, well, but," Scolor didn't know how to reply to that, "They're story is completely different than mine, I don't know what Triton told Mel, but we just have completely different stories you-"
"SILENCE!" Fira shouted, "LEt's not stray from why I came here in the first place." She looks and Dracos and points, "DracosTheStrong, I hear you and Nat are "together" is that true?"
"Yes...it is true...we have been for a while."
"You trust her so much, you even told her your true name, which everybody already knew really, Lloyd," Fira said.
"His name is Lloyd?" Scolor asked.
"Yes, it is," Lloyd said to Scolor, then turned his attention to Fira and said, "You didn't come here to tell me my name, so why?"
"Nat wants to announce something to the four of us, we shall go," Fira said. So her, Scolor, and Lloyd walked into the throne room of Elemental Castle, where the met Nat, their leader, and what she told them shocked everyone.
"We have a new clan ally, the clan of one who used to be a Light Commandor, The Whispering Shadows."
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u probaly know more then me lol
and great 4 way war now!!
dark u gotta choose a side your in whispering shadows too =p
and great 4 way war now!!
dark u gotta choose a side your in whispering shadows too =p
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CHAPTER IV The Battle Of Oaklore
ONE WEEK LATER!!
The SwordHaven Imperial Fleet, Currently being led by Commandor BladeWarrior, began to cast shadows upon Oaklore, where they met Lore's Elementals Fleet, led by Lloyd, in the first battle of the war
"Commandor BladeWarrior, the Elemental Fleet is upon us, led by General Lloyd in the Flagship Elomentis. Your orders sir?" A Squad Leader asked Blade.
"Release the Infantry ships (Infantry Ships are small, one-man ships with one cannon), the war has begun," Blade replied. At the same Lloyd unleashed his infantry ships, and explosion flooded the sky. Blade worried about the ships falling into Oaklore, so Blade sent word to Rolith to put Oaklores Overshield up to protect them.
They finally gained an open shot at the Elomentis, Blade commanded, "Fire the main cannon!" A buzzing noise came from the front of the ship, and around 50 cannons sprung out of the airship.
One of Lloyd's men called to him, "Sir! They are preparing their main cannons!"
"Damn, already!? Ours arent even close to preparing yet!" Lloyd shouted. The cannons roared, and opened fire on the Elomentis, the Flagship tried to steer out of the way but wasnt quick enough, and the right wing burst into flames. Lloyd looked worried, and said, "They have great power...I'm sorry Nat, I must surrender." And so The Battle Of Oaklore, was a victory for SwordHaven.
Now I need a name for SwordHaven's Flagship...any ideas?
ONE WEEK LATER!!
The SwordHaven Imperial Fleet, Currently being led by Commandor BladeWarrior, began to cast shadows upon Oaklore, where they met Lore's Elementals Fleet, led by Lloyd, in the first battle of the war
"Commandor BladeWarrior, the Elemental Fleet is upon us, led by General Lloyd in the Flagship Elomentis. Your orders sir?" A Squad Leader asked Blade.
"Release the Infantry ships (Infantry Ships are small, one-man ships with one cannon), the war has begun," Blade replied. At the same Lloyd unleashed his infantry ships, and explosion flooded the sky. Blade worried about the ships falling into Oaklore, so Blade sent word to Rolith to put Oaklores Overshield up to protect them.
They finally gained an open shot at the Elomentis, Blade commanded, "Fire the main cannon!" A buzzing noise came from the front of the ship, and around 50 cannons sprung out of the airship.
One of Lloyd's men called to him, "Sir! They are preparing their main cannons!"
"Damn, already!? Ours arent even close to preparing yet!" Lloyd shouted. The cannons roared, and opened fire on the Elomentis, the Flagship tried to steer out of the way but wasnt quick enough, and the right wing burst into flames. Lloyd looked worried, and said, "They have great power...I'm sorry Nat, I must surrender." And so The Battle Of Oaklore, was a victory for SwordHaven.
Now I need a name for SwordHaven's Flagship...any ideas?
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I guess thats it...your the only one that reads my stories anymore
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then why dont you ever comment? Oh and you'll be in this one, dont worry
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ax defiantly does not read it because he never gets on
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irockall655 wrote:ax defiantly does not read it because he never gets on
Well, unlike some of you guys, I'm still in school. Also, I'm trying to get ready for finals. Also, I've been practicing break dancing and I've also been getting ready because football starts this summer. Also, my family is going through a lot right now. My grandpa has cancer and is going through surgery this June and there's a lot more, my mom said I can't talk about it to anyone. So, I'm busy right now, so don't attack me on a topic I hardly read and don't post on. If you want to start something, say it to my face.
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i actually kinda got lost between the roleplaying and the books so i just stopped. I might start again tho now that im out of school.
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